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Magnus Modelle

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Pitching Zael
« on: February 07, 2013, 05:22:04 pm »
Hello Admins of O'raion,

I am obviously Magnus Modelle(or Cody irl) and I come to you today with a question to the general audience of O'raion. The character that I have provided upon my registration was taken out of a series I write with a friend(please note Jizero  for confirmation purposes, disclaimer, and details), and I would like request permission for the subjects which I post to incorporate another character called Zael(Bio, lol, and general stats will be provided). The reason in which I bring it to your attention is that Zael is a figment of Magnus' imagination created by the Phenoma World when he and his friend Wel became seperated. Zael appears randomly to fight with Magnus only to disappear and boasts equal strengths towards him. It is believed that Zael is responsible for taking Wel and leading Magnus here. Zael is villianous, but only has a mindset towards the harm of Magnus and will disappear after battles. Zael is not intended to harm the Academy, its populace, or interfere with any of its laws. I have a disclaimer for such occurrences.

DISCLAIMER: Zael is in NO way God modded. Can be defeated and WIL be. Anyone coming into contact with Zael is suspectable to damage. I DO NOT make any rules on this site and in now way intend to modify any of the sites regulations. Zael is simply for story purposes regarding Magnus Modelled.I wish only for the support and criticism of admins and members alike regarding Zael.

If approved, I will prepare a profile and submit creation sheet to the directed sheet of admins choice.

Thank ypy for your time,
Magnus Modelle
Name:Magnus Modelle
Age: 18
Gender:male
Look:
Bio: Magnus was born to a single mother and has two siblings. His older brother Glory was known for ravaging Magnus' home planet due to his mass intake of negative energy making him unstable. Magnus is what is called an Enota. Enota often take on a human-like form to blend in with society and can slightly alter the reality around them. Magnus was born a Phenomite-Enota, an Enota who feeds on Negative energy to evolve. Traits include being bound to an alternate dimension called he Phenoma world. Magnus was originally lead to O'raion in search of his friend Wel.

abilities: Traveling to an alternate dimension through rifts he creates, controlling monsters from an alternate dimension(Phenoma world), extreme speed

Likes: Tea, learning, dark places, negative energy, pineapple, and microwave pizza


Dislikes: Sudden outbursts, illogical explanations, anybody who isn't an Enota or Wel.

Classes:elemental studies,M/S,transformation, theivery, assassin 101
Clubs/activities: if have any
Class Rep:yukimora jinzo
Year: 2nd
Equipment:nope

Stats: total 400
strength-40
speed-100
intelligence-100
energy to use ability-20
stamina-100
martial arts skills-40
equipment skills-0

"I appeared here after being separated from Wel in the Phenoma World. What is this place? I have to find Wel before I become consumed by negative energy."

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Re: Pitching Zael
« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2013, 12:41:28 am »
i feel like a CEO reading this. i do not mind zael being created, now understand though that does not me he is approved. we would have to look over the actual made character and then it would have to be approved by 2 admins. i suggest creating him with your magnus account and adding him to that instead of making a whole nother registry and what not. just a suggestion
Name: Jester Malcious
Age: 22
Gender:Male
Look:
Bio: Jester is a great magician who is known for his artisitic, gothic, and dark humorous magic. he goes about the world as his own boss, causing mayhem and misfortune where he sees fit.
ability: magic, transformations, illusions,
Equipment: Deadly Toys, Playing Cards, Tarot Cards

Stats: total 1500(wicked mode stats)
strength- 100(400)
speed- 100(500)
intelligence- 500(100)
energy to use ability- 500(100)
stamina- 100(200)
martial arts skills- 50(100)
equipment skills- 150(100)

Wicked Mode:

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Re: Pitching Zael
« Reply #2 on: February 08, 2013, 12:46:17 am »
I tried to sound professional lol. I could post Zael to this account, but as far as classification, what would I register him as. My original thought was maybe D class Demon.
Name:Magnus Modelle
Age: 18
Gender:male
Look:
Bio: Magnus was born to a single mother and has two siblings. His older brother Glory was known for ravaging Magnus' home planet due to his mass intake of negative energy making him unstable. Magnus is what is called an Enota. Enota often take on a human-like form to blend in with society and can slightly alter the reality around them. Magnus was born a Phenomite-Enota, an Enota who feeds on Negative energy to evolve. Traits include being bound to an alternate dimension called he Phenoma world. Magnus was originally lead to O'raion in search of his friend Wel.

abilities: Traveling to an alternate dimension through rifts he creates, controlling monsters from an alternate dimension(Phenoma world), extreme speed

Likes: Tea, learning, dark places, negative energy, pineapple, and microwave pizza


Dislikes: Sudden outbursts, illogical explanations, anybody who isn't an Enota or Wel.

Classes:elemental studies,M/S,transformation, theivery, assassin 101
Clubs/activities: if have any
Class Rep:yukimora jinzo
Year: 2nd
Equipment:nope

Stats: total 400
strength-40
speed-100
intelligence-100
energy to use ability-20
stamina-100
martial arts skills-40
equipment skills-0

"I appeared here after being separated from Wel in the Phenoma World. What is this place? I have to find Wel before I become consumed by negative energy."

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Re: Pitching Zael
« Reply #3 on: February 08, 2013, 12:59:58 am »
he has to have stat points. the demons and gods etc. have ranks
Name: Jester Malcious
Age: 22
Gender:Male
Look:
Bio: Jester is a great magician who is known for his artisitic, gothic, and dark humorous magic. he goes about the world as his own boss, causing mayhem and misfortune where he sees fit.
ability: magic, transformations, illusions,
Equipment: Deadly Toys, Playing Cards, Tarot Cards

Stats: total 1500(wicked mode stats)
strength- 100(400)
speed- 100(500)
intelligence- 500(100)
energy to use ability- 500(100)
stamina- 100(200)
martial arts skills- 50(100)
equipment skills- 150(100)

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Re: Pitching Zael
« Reply #4 on: February 08, 2013, 01:08:34 am »
Being a being created by the Phenoma World, could I classify him as a creature?
Name:Magnus Modelle
Age: 18
Gender:male
Look:
Bio: Magnus was born to a single mother and has two siblings. His older brother Glory was known for ravaging Magnus' home planet due to his mass intake of negative energy making him unstable. Magnus is what is called an Enota. Enota often take on a human-like form to blend in with society and can slightly alter the reality around them. Magnus was born a Phenomite-Enota, an Enota who feeds on Negative energy to evolve. Traits include being bound to an alternate dimension called he Phenoma world. Magnus was originally lead to O'raion in search of his friend Wel.

abilities: Traveling to an alternate dimension through rifts he creates, controlling monsters from an alternate dimension(Phenoma world), extreme speed

Likes: Tea, learning, dark places, negative energy, pineapple, and microwave pizza


Dislikes: Sudden outbursts, illogical explanations, anybody who isn't an Enota or Wel.

Classes:elemental studies,M/S,transformation, theivery, assassin 101
Clubs/activities: if have any
Class Rep:yukimora jinzo
Year: 2nd
Equipment:nope

Stats: total 400
strength-40
speed-100
intelligence-100
energy to use ability-20
stamina-100
martial arts skills-40
equipment skills-0

"I appeared here after being separated from Wel in the Phenoma World. What is this place? I have to find Wel before I become consumed by negative energy."