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haro masamune

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a climax to our tale?
« on: July 06, 2012, 01:21:11 am »
a thought occured. every good story must, unfortunately, come to its end. this is far off, but its a concept we must all head twards. missions should have meaning, enemys should clash, blood spills... people die. we have a demon to face, hes gaining power, but we see little sign. his signifigance is underplayed, falling second to our dramas. i say battles begin! i say attacks strike! war must be waged! not all at once. a build. we need a steady drop into chaos! start with some lesser minions. subtle attacks on our ventures. then raise to full blown strikes on the school! eventually it leads to war! full blown war! death! suffering! end game, if you will... and once the bodys are burried, time will pass. wounds will heal but scars remain. some will move on, become teachers here. others simply gone. a new generation.
Name: haro masamune
Age: 17
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Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
Clubs/activities:
Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
Year: 2
Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

Stats:2nd year-545
strength-90
speed-125
intelligence-80
energy to use ability-50
stamina-40
martial arts skills-40
equipment skills-120

"the light in my world, had faded and died.
the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

just when id quit, submit to fate,
she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

now i can smile. my pains fade away.
without that new light, id have died that day."

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CherrySwirl

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Re: a climax to our tale?
« Reply #1 on: July 06, 2012, 02:01:42 am »
I was working on something.

Three greater gods who are brothers. The Demon God, Dubradigdo, the father of demons. The dragon god, Celphied, the father of dragons. Lord of Nightmares, Arceus, god of the Astral realm(spirits etc).

Cherry is the reincarnation of the dragon god. Yukio as Cherry's rival was supposed to be the reincarnation of the demon god. I started working on something were the evil spirits of Dubradigdo were awakened by the Lord Of Nightmares to resurrect the demon god.

I was going to use this to create some conflict randomly. Maybe it's an idea.

Who's the demon you were talking about?

    “Memory is a way of holding on to the things you love, the things you are, the things you never want to lose.”

    Nickname:"The Dragon" "Cherry" "Cherry Boy"
    Name: Kaguutabe Yanbarakutuubei
    Age: Fifteen
    Gender: Male
    Look:
    5'7", slightly elongated ears, strong sense of smell, red hair, golden eyes, he wears headphones to cover his ears, sharp teeth.
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    Re: a climax to our tale?
    « Reply #2 on: July 06, 2012, 02:06:52 am »
    kyos brother, dude. hes the clear major demon of our story. ur ideas interesting tho ^^ itd need to be worked out.
    but the demon, the army, the war, they are from kyos brother that miles set free
    Name: haro masamune
    Age: 17
    Gender: male
    Look:




    Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
    ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
    Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
    Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
    Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
    Clubs/activities:
    Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
    Year: 2
    Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

    Stats:2nd year-545
    strength-90
    speed-125
    intelligence-80
    energy to use ability-50
    stamina-40
    martial arts skills-40
    equipment skills-120

    "the light in my world, had faded and died.
    the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

    just when id quit, submit to fate,
    she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

    through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
    her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

    now i can smile. my pains fade away.
    without that new light, id have died that day."

    CherrySwirl

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    Re: a climax to our tale?
    « Reply #3 on: July 06, 2012, 02:17:45 am »
    That sounds like a much better end game imo. lol Kyo's brother would make the ultimate villain.
    When did all of this happen? I knew nothing about it. Someone add this to the summaries D;
      “Memory is a way of holding on to the things you love, the things you are, the things you never want to lose.”

      Nickname:"The Dragon" "Cherry" "Cherry Boy"
      Name: Kaguutabe Yanbarakutuubei
      Age: Fifteen
      Gender: Male
      Look:
      5'7", slightly elongated ears, strong sense of smell, red hair, golden eyes, he wears headphones to cover his ears, sharp teeth.
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      Re: a climax to our tale?
      « Reply #4 on: July 06, 2012, 02:23:29 am »
      it was like a week ago bro o.o' ur way outta the loop. theres even a muramasa at his command, haros clans enemys.
      Name: haro masamune
      Age: 17
      Gender: male
      Look:




      Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
      ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
      Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
      Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
      Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
      Clubs/activities:
      Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
      Year: 2
      Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

      Stats:2nd year-545
      strength-90
      speed-125
      intelligence-80
      energy to use ability-50
      stamina-40
      martial arts skills-40
      equipment skills-120

      "the light in my world, had faded and died.
      the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

      just when id quit, submit to fate,
      she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

      through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
      her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

      now i can smile. my pains fade away.
      without that new light, id have died that day."

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      Re: a climax to our tale?
      « Reply #5 on: July 06, 2012, 12:50:58 pm »
      I think I'll adjust what I made up to fit the main one.
        “Memory is a way of holding on to the things you love, the things you are, the things you never want to lose.”

        Nickname:"The Dragon" "Cherry" "Cherry Boy"
        Name: Kaguutabe Yanbarakutuubei
        Age: Fifteen
        Gender: Male
        Look:
        5'7", slightly elongated ears, strong sense of smell, red hair, golden eyes, he wears headphones to cover his ears, sharp teeth.
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        Re: a climax to our tale?
        « Reply #6 on: July 06, 2012, 12:52:03 pm »
        sweet :D
        Name: haro masamune
        Age: 17
        Gender: male
        Look:




        Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
        ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
        Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
        Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
        Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
        Clubs/activities:
        Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
        Year: 2
        Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

        Stats:2nd year-545
        strength-90
        speed-125
        intelligence-80
        energy to use ability-50
        stamina-40
        martial arts skills-40
        equipment skills-120

        "the light in my world, had faded and died.
        the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

        just when id quit, submit to fate,
        she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

        through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
        her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

        now i can smile. my pains fade away.
        without that new light, id have died that day."

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        Re: a climax to our tale?
        « Reply #7 on: July 06, 2012, 06:11:29 pm »
        So, I switched it accordingly.
        The Lord of Nightmares is on Ankoboku's side for the sake of balance. He/she's pushing for Yukio to reawaken as the Demon god powers so that he can join Ankoboku's side as well.
          “Memory is a way of holding on to the things you love, the things you are, the things you never want to lose.”

          Nickname:"The Dragon" "Cherry" "Cherry Boy"
          Name: Kaguutabe Yanbarakutuubei
          Age: Fifteen
          Gender: Male
          Look:
          5'7", slightly elongated ears, strong sense of smell, red hair, golden eyes, he wears headphones to cover his ears, sharp teeth.
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          Re: a climax to our tale?
          « Reply #8 on: July 06, 2012, 06:15:48 pm »
          and as for you? which side will yours fall on?
          Name: haro masamune
          Age: 17
          Gender: male
          Look:




          Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
          ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
          Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
          Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
          Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
          Clubs/activities:
          Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
          Year: 2
          Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

          Stats:2nd year-545
          strength-90
          speed-125
          intelligence-80
          energy to use ability-50
          stamina-40
          martial arts skills-40
          equipment skills-120

          "the light in my world, had faded and died.
          the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

          just when id quit, submit to fate,
          she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

          through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
          her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

          now i can smile. my pains fade away.
          without that new light, id have died that day."

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          Re: a climax to our tale?
          « Reply #9 on: July 06, 2012, 06:21:11 pm »
          Depends. Of course Cherry is leaning towards the good side, BUT I think it depends on what happens with Yukio and Freya.
            “Memory is a way of holding on to the things you love, the things you are, the things you never want to lose.”

            Nickname:"The Dragon" "Cherry" "Cherry Boy"
            Name: Kaguutabe Yanbarakutuubei
            Age: Fifteen
            Gender: Male
            Look:
            5'7", slightly elongated ears, strong sense of smell, red hair, golden eyes, he wears headphones to cover his ears, sharp teeth.
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            Re: a climax to our tale?
            « Reply #10 on: July 06, 2012, 06:53:03 pm »
            wait wait. when did she get involved? '.'
            Name: haro masamune
            Age: 17
            Gender: male
            Look:




            Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
            ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
            Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
            Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
            Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
            Clubs/activities:
            Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
            Year: 2
            Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

            Stats:2nd year-545
            strength-90
            speed-125
            intelligence-80
            energy to use ability-50
            stamina-40
            martial arts skills-40
            equipment skills-120

            "the light in my world, had faded and died.
            the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

            just when id quit, submit to fate,
            she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

            through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
            her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

            now i can smile. my pains fade away.
            without that new light, id have died that day."

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            Re: a climax to our tale?
            « Reply #11 on: July 06, 2012, 07:03:15 pm »
            It's a love Triangle~


              “Memory is a way of holding on to the things you love, the things you are, the things you never want to lose.”

              Nickname:"The Dragon" "Cherry" "Cherry Boy"
              Name: Kaguutabe Yanbarakutuubei
              Age: Fifteen
              Gender: Male
              Look:
              5'7", slightly elongated ears, strong sense of smell, red hair, golden eyes, he wears headphones to cover his ears, sharp teeth.
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              Re: a climax to our tale?
              « Reply #12 on: July 06, 2012, 07:04:00 pm »
              u, her and yuki?
              Name: haro masamune
              Age: 17
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              Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
              ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
              Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
              Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
              Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
              Clubs/activities:
              Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
              Year: 2
              Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

              Stats:2nd year-545
              strength-90
              speed-125
              intelligence-80
              energy to use ability-50
              stamina-40
              martial arts skills-40
              equipment skills-120

              "the light in my world, had faded and died.
              the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

              just when id quit, submit to fate,
              she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

              through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
              her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

              now i can smile. my pains fade away.
              without that new light, id have died that day."

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              Re: a climax to our tale?
              « Reply #13 on: July 06, 2012, 07:13:32 pm »
              Yeah. She just turned him down. Now, it can go anyway. lol
                “Memory is a way of holding on to the things you love, the things you are, the things you never want to lose.”

                Nickname:"The Dragon" "Cherry" "Cherry Boy"
                Name: Kaguutabe Yanbarakutuubei
                Age: Fifteen
                Gender: Male
                Look:
                5'7", slightly elongated ears, strong sense of smell, red hair, golden eyes, he wears headphones to cover his ears, sharp teeth.
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                Re: a climax to our tale?
                « Reply #14 on: July 06, 2012, 07:17:37 pm »
                ah. coo
                Name: haro masamune
                Age: 17
                Gender: male
                Look:




                Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
                ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
                Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
                Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
                Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
                Clubs/activities:
                Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
                Year: 2
                Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

                Stats:2nd year-545
                strength-90
                speed-125
                intelligence-80
                energy to use ability-50
                stamina-40
                martial arts skills-40
                equipment skills-120

                "the light in my world, had faded and died.
                the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

                just when id quit, submit to fate,
                she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

                through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
                her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

                now i can smile. my pains fade away.
                without that new light, id have died that day."