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Sign up / Re: Wel Invigora
« on: February 15, 2013, 08:27:36 pm »
This would be my second account

Abandoned Town / Re: The Angel's retribution [morning/open]
« on: February 11, 2013, 01:33:22 am »
Magnus began thinking to himself, "Could this place possibly be a product of the Phenoma World?" He began to observe his sorroundings.

Magnus:(It would take at least a hundred Enota to alter a space into this Island. The Phenoma World usually only creates places based on memory or emotion. I can't feel any presence pertaining to the Phenoma world either. This place is real.) I do not know who you are, but fate has bestowed our meeting. I am in search of one I lost.....a loved one...

Magnus was reluctant on telling the mysterious woman anymore

Magnus: I was brought here from a different dimension; one that transcends normality. I was not alone...

He bagan to think of Wel, the one who had kept him safe all this time from the horrors the Phenoma World had shown him and bestowed upon his body. It was a dark place filled with neagtive spaces containing memories of misery within its walls. The twisted clocks that covered its skies held the time which light and prosperity had forgotten. The essence of fear whispered in the winds, its inhabitants filled with hate, and misery grew within everything the Phenoma world touched. Its creatures evolved accordingly and the world grew with every negative influence. The end to Magnus nightmare had been Wel all along

The boy who had stuck to Magnus like glue since the day they layed eyes on each other and had proved to be Magnus' Savior. Their connection began to lead to something Magnus could not understand, but he liked it. Magnus being an Enota, he longed for a positive energy to make him feel loved, wanted like none other before it, and Wel, a Black Heart trying to escape his fate of becoming something he was not seemed to be perfect for each other. Magnus at this time would give anything to go back.

Magnus:(I'm coming Wel. Just hold on a little longer and I promise everything will be alright.) I will return to what is civilization here. This variation of normality has proven no different from mine. Maybe there I can find some answers.

Penny for your thoughts / A Race Index
« on: February 09, 2013, 07:41:12 pm »
This suggestion came to mind when I began to think of just how many species we have on this site. I'm sure that some characters may appear human, but are not. I believe a race index may prevent Modding to one's character in mid battle or in situations they just do not want yo be bothered with. For example, my character is not human. He is Enota. Can anyone list an Enota'a abilities(Jizero excluded lol)? If there were an index, people could easly find access to this information so they do not become cheated. I'm sure races would also seek admin approval.

Abandoned Town / Re: The Angel's retribution [morning/open]
« on: February 09, 2013, 03:04:06 pm »
Magnus: I do not belong here. I am merely searching for what I have lost. Nothing more. Nothing less. The sooner, the better. This isn't an imaginable place for one of your image either.

Magnus began to wonder if this woman may have been the presence he felt.

Sign up / Re: Zael
« on: February 09, 2013, 02:53:13 pm »
That's fine. I love seeing my ideas contribute towards anything. Jizero and myself came here as writers producing our own work on paper. To see such aspects flourish among a much more vast populace pleases me. I will be more than happy to share what I have to offer at any given time. If anyone can benefit from any ideas I may share, it will prove to be even more worth it.

Abandoned Town / Re: The Angel's retribution [morning/open]
« on: February 09, 2013, 01:54:12 pm »
Magnus: I feel so empty. Why was I lead here? Is this where Wel had gone? Why would the Phenoma World separate us? Does it know that I need him?

Magnus can feel an uneasy presence in the air

Magnus: I'm not alone here...

Magnus turns around


nobody's there

Magnus: There's no one there.

Sign up / Re: Zael
« on: February 09, 2013, 05:34:18 am »
I managed to fix Zael's picture. This one should be better.

O'raion Public Library / Re: My Brother/Memories [afternoon/open]
« on: February 09, 2013, 05:33:05 am »
Magnus gets upo from the table and begins to look at the books on the shelves.

Magnus: Manga; my sister would like this. Glory could spend days in here. I guess you don't realize what you have until its gone. The sooner I find Wel, the sooner we get out of here. There isnt much time. If I don't find him, the Phenoma World will begin to feed me negative energy. Wel...I need you.

Magnus sits on the floor in the back section against a wall.

*Fun Fact: Glory, Magnus' older brother has taken in so much Negative energy that he can only walk the world of normality(our existence) for 3 days at a time before returning to the Phenoma World. Glory's evolution through negative energy has caused his voice to sound distorted and his power level to become unstable.NOTE: Glory is NOT a registered O'raion character and is in no way intended to be used as one. He is noted throughout Magnus' roleplay for reference and memory purposes only.

Sign up / Re: Zael
« on: February 08, 2013, 01:40:45 am »
I apologize. I'm doing this all from moble. All I did was copy a full size URL. I will attempt to find a smaller image yes.

Sign up / Zael
« on: February 08, 2013, 01:26:20 am »
Name: Zael
place(s) of origin: Phenoma World(alternate dimension)


Bio: Zael was created when Magnus and Wel were seperated in the Phenoma World. When Magnus appeared in O'raion, he was greeted by this creature. Zael is the only one of its kind and is a figment of Magnus' imagination created to rival magnus in skill. Zael appears only to fight Magnus and disappears shortly after every time. Magnus cannot run from Zael, for the Phenoma World can spawn Zael to fight Magnus at most given times. Magnus believes Zael to be responsible for kidnapping Wel. Zael doesn't speak except for a few short phrases and evolves according to the same laws as Phenomite-Enota evolution in a sense that only reflects Magnus' growth(Basicly stating Zael grows with Magnus to match Magnus' level).

Level:(copies that of Magnus) 1

Abilities: Conjuring electric attacks. Slowing itself down to increase attack power(already moves fairly slow). Increasing defense slightly. Vanishing and reappearing(this takes time between lmovements). Fleeing battle by being called back into the Phenoma world(he only fights magnus). Deflecting massive attacks by merely matching their power with his sword(will do this even if he takes on serious damage).

Strengths: Exceptional attack power compared to Magnus. Heavy armor.

 Weaknesses: Zael moves extremely slow.Being caught off guard, being distracted, armor penetration. Thinks he can survive anything by simply walking through it or striking it with his sword regardless of how much damage he takes.

Sign up / Re: Pitching Zael
« on: February 08, 2013, 01:08:34 am »
Being a being created by the Phenoma World, could I classify him as a creature?

Sign up / Re: Pitching Zael
« on: February 08, 2013, 12:46:17 am »
I tried to sound professional lol. I could post Zael to this account, but as far as classification, what would I register him as. My original thought was maybe D class Demon.

Abandoned Town / The Angel's retribution [morning/open]
« on: February 08, 2013, 12:09:08 am »
After wandering about O'raion for a day in search of Wel, Magnus finds his way to this abandoned town. He struggles with his composure as his negative energy grows with every second without Wel, the only person keeping him in a positive spirit.

Magnus: Love.... that's what it was called. That's what Wel said to me. He said he loved me.

DISCLAIMER: Magnus is in no way a yaoi rp character. Enota can reproduce using energy and with either gender therefore not caring with whom they do it with. Wel is not Enota. They are both guys though.

Housing Area / Far different from the desert sun[daylight/open]
« on: February 07, 2013, 08:42:41 pm »
Magnus made his way to the housing district during his search for Wel.

Magnus: The inhabitants here may know of whom I seek. If I do not find him soon, I may be exposed to nega(negative impulses). This place isn't like my homeworld. Kira Ma is a desert. Enota normally live in prodominately hot places. These beings are all abnormal to me...

Sign up / Pitching Zael
« on: February 07, 2013, 05:22:04 pm »
Hello Admins of O'raion,

I am obviously Magnus Modelle(or Cody irl) and I come to you today with a question to the general audience of O'raion. The character that I have provided upon my registration was taken out of a series I write with a friend(please note Jizero  for confirmation purposes, disclaimer, and details), and I would like request permission for the subjects which I post to incorporate another character called Zael(Bio, lol, and general stats will be provided). The reason in which I bring it to your attention is that Zael is a figment of Magnus' imagination created by the Phenoma World when he and his friend Wel became seperated. Zael appears randomly to fight with Magnus only to disappear and boasts equal strengths towards him. It is believed that Zael is responsible for taking Wel and leading Magnus here. Zael is villianous, but only has a mindset towards the harm of Magnus and will disappear after battles. Zael is not intended to harm the Academy, its populace, or interfere with any of its laws. I have a disclaimer for such occurrences.

DISCLAIMER: Zael is in NO way God modded. Can be defeated and WIL be. Anyone coming into contact with Zael is suspectable to damage. I DO NOT make any rules on this site and in now way intend to modify any of the sites regulations. Zael is simply for story purposes regarding Magnus Modelled.I wish only for the support and criticism of admins and members alike regarding Zael.

If approved, I will prepare a profile and submit creation sheet to the directed sheet of admins choice.

Thank ypy for your time,
Magnus Modelle

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