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Title: Zael
Post by: Magnus Modelle on February 08, 2013, 01:26:20 am
Name: Zael
place(s) of origin: Phenoma World(alternate dimension)


Bio: Zael was created when Magnus and Wel were seperated in the Phenoma World. When Magnus appeared in O'raion, he was greeted by this creature. Zael is the only one of its kind and is a figment of Magnus' imagination created to rival magnus in skill. Zael appears only to fight Magnus and disappears shortly after every time. Magnus cannot run from Zael, for the Phenoma World can spawn Zael to fight Magnus at most given times. Magnus believes Zael to be responsible for kidnapping Wel. Zael doesn't speak except for a few short phrases and evolves according to the same laws as Phenomite-Enota evolution in a sense that only reflects Magnus' growth(Basicly stating Zael grows with Magnus to match Magnus' level).

Level:(copies that of Magnus) 1

Abilities: Conjuring electric attacks. Slowing itself down to increase attack power(already moves fairly slow). Increasing defense slightly. Vanishing and reappearing(this takes time between lmovements). Fleeing battle by being called back into the Phenoma world(he only fights magnus). Deflecting massive attacks by merely matching their power with his sword(will do this even if he takes on serious damage).

Strengths: Exceptional attack power compared to Magnus. Heavy armor.

 Weaknesses: Zael moves extremely slow.Being caught off guard, being distracted, armor penetration. Thinks he can survive anything by simply walking through it or striking it with his sword regardless of how much damage he takes.
Title: Re: Zael
Post by: Jester on February 08, 2013, 01:36:22 am
other thank the pic being super dumb big i think its alright. if possible can you find a smaller pic, other than that i approve. does another admin second?
Title: Re: Zael
Post by: Magnus Modelle on February 08, 2013, 01:40:45 am
I apologize. I'm doing this all from moble. All I did was copy a full size URL. I will attempt to find a smaller image yes.
Title: Re: Zael
Post by: Magnus Modelle on February 09, 2013, 05:34:18 am
I managed to fix Zael's picture. This one should be better.
Title: Re: Zael
Post by: Kaya Mitsume on February 09, 2013, 02:40:01 pm
Now I can't see a picture at all. This has my okay, from the looks of it. It will be played by any and all admins, but only admins, unless we give a player direct permission to do so. Should that happen, the player will have strict guidelines and a set goal to accomplish before it goes away. A note in total: *this enemy will never accidentally or purposefully kill anyone, aside from it's target, perhaps. It will retreat before such a thing occurs. It will harm anyone in it's path to Magnus, however.* As a few can attest, I am not above giving players duties and things to accomplish for me, if they volunteer. Sometimes, that's fun. :D

Either way, I do want you to understand something else, Magnus. By bringing him here, and turning him over to us, we may take the idea behind him, take the things you've told us of him, and give other goals/perceptions/surprises, in order to keep even you guessing. This site is full of those sorts of things happening. We each have taken certain ideas others have, and spun them. It happens, and it leads to fun. Because the one that created the idea even has the ability to be intrigued and taken off guard. We will attempt to stick to the spirit of the ideal you've created, though.
Title: Re: Zael
Post by: Magnus Modelle on February 09, 2013, 02:53:13 pm
That's fine. I love seeing my ideas contribute towards anything. Jizero and myself came here as writers producing our own work on paper. To see such aspects flourish among a much more vast populace pleases me. I will be more than happy to share what I have to offer at any given time. If anyone can benefit from any ideas I may share, it will prove to be even more worth it.
Title: Re: Zael
Post by: Kaya Mitsume on February 09, 2013, 03:00:05 pm
Excellent. I'll enjoy seeing more of your ideas come to light and fruition. Another creative mind is a wonderful thing to have. And those with stories to tell, or ideas to share are welcome. I'm always up for spinning out further stories and making things happen.