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haro masamune

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Memory Lane (Plz Plz Plz read guys!)
« on: February 17, 2013, 11:46:51 pm »
Ok, I think ive done it this time guys :D I had a good IDEA! :D

http://memorylane.createaforum.com/index.php

And heres the basis :D

You have awoken in a room with many other young men and women. Some have woken up before you, and some are still out cold. The ones that are concious are doing one of four things; Crying, asking eachother questions the other has no answer to, desperaitely looking for an exit, or trying to wake the others up. Looking around, you see you are in an empty white room. No furnature, no doors, not even an obvious source of light, though all the emptiness is clear.


After what seem like hours, something happens; the wall on one side forms a doorway touching the joining point of the roof and wall. Off this point, a small flight of stairs decends, not touching the ground, but instead only forming the few stairs needed for onr to make an entrance.

And an entrance was made. A man clad in a dark purple shirt came down enough to be seen from the blinding light emited from the gateway. His shirt had torn up sleves, ending jaggedly at his mid-upper arm, and going down only enough to touch his belly button. His black jeans were torn in a similar mannor, but decended to his ancles. His face was veiled in a mask bearing 2 red lines down it, one as wide as the dark eye hole on its side, the other thick untill it reached the eye, then splitting into two tear-like marks down either side of the eye. The lines went all the way down to a sinister smile at the bottem.

Behind this man, still bathed in light, were several shadows, all seeming to bear a similar mask.

The man in front sat on the bottem most step, looking down at the collection of people, his posture relaxed, as one would be playing a game.

After all had met his gaze, he lifted his hand to his face and moved the mask slightly to the side, revealing a bright red eye and a grin matching his masks.

"Welcome, my dears, to Memory Lane" The man announced.

"Now, I am sure you have many questions, but they will have to wait till later. For now, just know, we are here to help. We are 'Persona', your... I guess we could be called the 'Head Masters' of this 'Institution'." He stoped to have a supressed laugh at the concept before continuing.

"All your questions will be answered as long as you follow us... Now..!" He yelled as he clapped his hands together. As the sound reached your ears, rows doorways similar to the one above opened up along the walls.

"Your rooms are through these doorways, down the halls. Womens dorms are to the left, mens are to the right. You will see the ground before you turn gold in a moment. This will lead you to your room, where you will find your name and other useful things."

And as he said it, before everyones eyes there was a path. Noone could see the same one, as they ran off in different directions.

"Thats right my dears" He said as he stood to go back into the room of light. "Follow the yellow brick road"
Name: haro masamune
Age: 17
Gender: male
Look:




Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
Clubs/activities:
Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
Year: 2
Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

Stats:2nd year-545
strength-90
speed-125
intelligence-80
energy to use ability-50
stamina-40
martial arts skills-40
equipment skills-120

"the light in my world, had faded and died.
the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

just when id quit, submit to fate,
she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

now i can smile. my pains fade away.
without that new light, id have died that day."

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Re: Memory Lane (Plz Plz Plz read guys!)
« Reply #1 on: February 17, 2013, 11:55:34 pm »
Kinda sounds like life is money..... Im game.
name: shinji
age:15
look: He's 5'12 with yellow eyes
Bio:  shinji is a genuis but he does not act like it he loves too be around his friends and making the people around him laugh he does not get angry often but when he does goes on a rampage, but overwise he's a clam guy, he hates his family because of when he was only 11 they tried to kill him. so he make's it his goal to kill them anyway he can.
powers: create and control fire, water,air and magic
Likes: hanging with friends, girls(kind of a pervert),skipping class, making people laugh, randomness,sleeping, training
Dislikes: studying, people that  thinks that they are above ever one else, his family.
Classes:Elemental Studies, Supernatural/Demonology,
Magic/Sorcery,
History,
Survival
Clubs/activities: leader of the magical force
Class Rep: Yukimora Jinzo
Year:2nd year
Equipment: Gauntlets, twin desert eagle(left: Zeus silver right: hades black)
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Re: Memory Lane (Plz Plz Plz read guys!)
« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2013, 11:58:30 pm »
Woot :D wait... whats life is money?
Name: haro masamune
Age: 17
Gender: male
Look:




Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
Clubs/activities:
Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
Year: 2
Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

Stats:2nd year-545
strength-90
speed-125
intelligence-80
energy to use ability-50
stamina-40
martial arts skills-40
equipment skills-120

"the light in my world, had faded and died.
the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

just when id quit, submit to fate,
she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

now i can smile. my pains fade away.
without that new light, id have died that day."

Shinji

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Re: Memory Lane (Plz Plz Plz read guys!)
« Reply #3 on: February 18, 2013, 12:06:37 am »
A awesome manga.... google it.
name: shinji
age:15
look: He's 5'12 with yellow eyes
Bio:  shinji is a genuis but he does not act like it he loves too be around his friends and making the people around him laugh he does not get angry often but when he does goes on a rampage, but overwise he's a clam guy, he hates his family because of when he was only 11 they tried to kill him. so he make's it his goal to kill them anyway he can.
powers: create and control fire, water,air and magic
Likes: hanging with friends, girls(kind of a pervert),skipping class, making people laugh, randomness,sleeping, training
Dislikes: studying, people that  thinks that they are above ever one else, his family.
Classes:Elemental Studies, Supernatural/Demonology,
Magic/Sorcery,
History,
Survival
Clubs/activities: leader of the magical force
Class Rep: Yukimora Jinzo
Year:2nd year
Equipment: Gauntlets, twin desert eagle(left: Zeus silver right: hades black)
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Re: Memory Lane (Plz Plz Plz read guys!)
« Reply #4 on: February 18, 2013, 12:25:33 am »
thats awesome :D i just finished the first chapter!
Name: haro masamune
Age: 17
Gender: male
Look:




Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
Clubs/activities:
Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
Year: 2
Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

Stats:2nd year-545
strength-90
speed-125
intelligence-80
energy to use ability-50
stamina-40
martial arts skills-40
equipment skills-120

"the light in my world, had faded and died.
the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

just when id quit, submit to fate,
she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

now i can smile. my pains fade away.
without that new light, id have died that day."

Shinji

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Re: Memory Lane (Plz Plz Plz read guys!)
« Reply #5 on: February 18, 2013, 12:38:37 am »
Gawd your going to love it.
name: shinji
age:15
look: He's 5'12 with yellow eyes
Bio:  shinji is a genuis but he does not act like it he loves too be around his friends and making the people around him laugh he does not get angry often but when he does goes on a rampage, but overwise he's a clam guy, he hates his family because of when he was only 11 they tried to kill him. so he make's it his goal to kill them anyway he can.
powers: create and control fire, water,air and magic
Likes: hanging with friends, girls(kind of a pervert),skipping class, making people laugh, randomness,sleeping, training
Dislikes: studying, people that  thinks that they are above ever one else, his family.
Classes:Elemental Studies, Supernatural/Demonology,
Magic/Sorcery,
History,
Survival
Clubs/activities: leader of the magical force
Class Rep: Yukimora Jinzo
Year:2nd year
Equipment: Gauntlets, twin desert eagle(left: Zeus silver right: hades black)
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Re: Memory Lane (Plz Plz Plz read guys!)
« Reply #6 on: February 18, 2013, 12:57:12 am »
already am :D

i made an example character btw, so u can see exactly what im looking for :D
Name: haro masamune
Age: 17
Gender: male
Look:




Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
Clubs/activities:
Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
Year: 2
Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

Stats:2nd year-545
strength-90
speed-125
intelligence-80
energy to use ability-50
stamina-40
martial arts skills-40
equipment skills-120

"the light in my world, had faded and died.
the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

just when id quit, submit to fate,
she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

now i can smile. my pains fade away.
without that new light, id have died that day."

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« Reply #7 on: February 18, 2013, 01:27:54 am »
Already have the site book marked, im going to work on the character in the morning
name: shinji
age:15
look: He's 5'12 with yellow eyes
Bio:  shinji is a genuis but he does not act like it he loves too be around his friends and making the people around him laugh he does not get angry often but when he does goes on a rampage, but overwise he's a clam guy, he hates his family because of when he was only 11 they tried to kill him. so he make's it his goal to kill them anyway he can.
powers: create and control fire, water,air and magic
Likes: hanging with friends, girls(kind of a pervert),skipping class, making people laugh, randomness,sleeping, training
Dislikes: studying, people that  thinks that they are above ever one else, his family.
Classes:Elemental Studies, Supernatural/Demonology,
Magic/Sorcery,
History,
Survival
Clubs/activities: leader of the magical force
Class Rep: Yukimora Jinzo
Year:2nd year
Equipment: Gauntlets, twin desert eagle(left: Zeus silver right: hades black)
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« Reply #8 on: February 18, 2013, 01:30:46 am »
kk awesome
Name: haro masamune
Age: 17
Gender: male
Look:




Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
Clubs/activities:
Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
Year: 2
Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

Stats:2nd year-545
strength-90
speed-125
intelligence-80
energy to use ability-50
stamina-40
martial arts skills-40
equipment skills-120

"the light in my world, had faded and died.
the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

just when id quit, submit to fate,
she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

now i can smile. my pains fade away.
without that new light, id have died that day."

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« Reply #9 on: February 18, 2013, 10:36:25 am »
Sounds pretty cool I willing to try.
Name: Anihe Tamaski
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Look: I guess I should say she is 5'9 in a half with extremely long Royal Purple hair with purple eyes
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Yup
So you know what it means
Nope
Oh, y-you don't ? Then where have you heard it before?
..... When people are angry or sad they say it or disappointed....
Has someone every said that to you?
....yea
Who?
The world why of course
How did you respond
.... I am the girl outside running around with no shoes playing in puddles and laughing my ass off
......I think we are done here
No matter the problem or situation let no one bring you down and when it rains there is always puddles to enjoy :)