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Kaya Mitsume

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Abandoned Prison
« on: June 30, 2012, 06:52:41 pm »
With metal bars beginning to rust through, and equally rusty padlocks, this deserted prison doesn't appear to have the capabilities to hold anyone among the living, but that doesn't stop it from holding other things.

Names and dates are carved into the stone walls, and blood still colors the floors and fixtures in various places. A frayed and dirty piece of rope remains tied in the rafters of this place. The metal bars of the death cages that this became rise and pierce into the ceiling. That rope is not within one of the cells.

One chair, sitting beside the cell furthest from the door, has begun to rot. Mice are now this place's only inhabitants, and even they don't seem happy. Death lingers in a sour smell and a deep shadowed pall over this place. Though it really shouldn't.

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Re: Abandoned Prison
« Reply #1 on: July 02, 2012, 10:52:00 pm »
After hours of walking, Miles found himself walking in front of an abandoned prison. "Seems pretty weird.." He said to himself, jumping over the barbed wire to get to the free time grounds. He stood in the center, walking towards the main Cell Block.
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« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2012, 11:10:02 pm »
He can hear something. The echoes of something being applied to the bars. Up and down. Like a baton. For just a split second, he can see blood on those bars. And then it's gone, leaving behind the rusting pieces of pipe.

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« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2012, 11:12:45 pm »
His spider sense went off like clockwork when he heard the sound. He immediately jumped to the roof and looked at the bars where he heard the noise. When he saw nothing, he sighed and let his feet dangle from the roof.
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Re: Abandoned Prison
« Reply #4 on: July 02, 2012, 11:32:35 pm »
He's nearly scared off the roof when the warning siren goes off. It's approximately 20 feet away from him. It nearly scares him out of his skin...literally.

It goes off for 15 seconds, and in the middle of oneof the wails, it is cut off.

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« Reply #5 on: July 02, 2012, 11:33:46 pm »
Miles jumped when the siren went off, and the Suit didn't like that, receding into his skin.
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« Reply #6 on: July 02, 2012, 11:41:22 pm »
:D can i help, kaya? i have an idea!)
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Bio: keeps to himself, not cold but distant. has warmed up to afew people but even they know little
ability: summon familiar (fox), energy blade
Likes:pocky, honest people, people who mind their own buisness
Dislikes: overly friendly people, overly hyper people, lies, fish (as food)
Classes: melee wepon 2, swordsmanship 2, demonology 2, history 1
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Class Rep:Yukimora Jinzo
Year: 2
Equipment: sword. bokken in school, katana after school.

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strength-90
speed-125
intelligence-80
energy to use ability-50
stamina-40
martial arts skills-40
equipment skills-120

"the light in my world, had faded and died.
the absence was crushing. my very soul cryed.

just when id quit, submit to fate,
she came from the hevens, just as its to late.

through her sweet eyes, id forgotten my pain.
her warmth, her smile, it kept me saine.

now i can smile. my pains fade away.
without that new light, id have died that day."

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Re: Abandoned Prison
« Reply #7 on: July 02, 2012, 11:46:42 pm »
(PM me with the idea, and we'll talk about it.)

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Re: Abandoned Prison
« Reply #8 on: July 02, 2012, 11:52:27 pm »
o.0 So i get left out >.>
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Re: Abandoned Prison
« Reply #9 on: July 02, 2012, 11:58:14 pm »
Well, yes :D He's not there exploring, and you are. You're not allowed to know what awaits you :D It's more fun this way. (And I'm just a smidge sadistic, what do ya want?) As I created this, I had an idea of what it was.

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Re: Abandoned Prison
« Reply #10 on: July 03, 2012, 01:33:26 pm »
The roof beneath him begins to rumble and creak, as it caves in. Miles finds himself falling backward into the darkness of the chasm that just opened.

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« Reply #11 on: July 03, 2012, 09:11:10 pm »
Miles tried to jump away, but fell into the falling rubble.
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« Reply #12 on: July 03, 2012, 09:21:50 pm »
It's not a soft landing. But, the venom suit saves his ass. It encased his body in it's dark tendrils. His breath is knocked from him still, but it's better than having every bone in his body shattered.

As he laid there, absolutely stunned for just a moment, he heard the rubble settling, dust falling. But underneath is the thickest silence he's ever experienced. The shadows are touchable. The blackness and depth is not unlike looking into a portal to Hell, itself. The abyssal nothing is yawning. It makes him shiver

But, he didn't believe in Hell...did he? If he wasn't sure, this gave good reason to believe. The daylight that should have streamed through that roof is nonexistent.

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« Reply #13 on: July 03, 2012, 09:25:33 pm »
Miles gasps for air as he hits the ground, his breath knocked from him. He removed a boulder that had fallen onto him, getting his legs loose He looked around. Nothing. Absolutely nothing. It's quiet. Very quiet. "Am I in hell?? And If so, why am I here so soon?" He said, trying to look around
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« Reply #14 on: July 03, 2012, 09:32:45 pm »
Something whispered in those deep shadows. The dark caught the voice so it didn't travel to the Spider so well. It was like it knew. Vibrations, sounds, were muffled.

Something brushed the ground, like silken fabric over a concrete floor. The instinct of the Spider knew. Something circles us... He couldn't feel footsteps, couldn't see movement, but his every screaming survival instinct said that there was something there.